Essay Revision Notices

ESSAY REVISION NOTICES

November 5, 2007

The essay, "D.S.M: Color It 52 Years Old," (I.D. No. 037), was corrected for errors which also necessitated modification of the descriptive content. Only the corrected essay is currently posted on the website. The old version is repudiated by the author and is no longer available.

October 29, 2007

An addendum was added to the essay, "We Do Not All Worship the Same God," (I.D. No. 146).

July 17, 2007

Two essays were improved for clarification of meaning. First, in the essay, "School Principal Walks Out," (I.D. No. 103), in paragraph 2, it was stated that the students protested against immigration reform. This was in reference to protests against the 2006 Sensenbrenner Bill--not against the comprehensive reform proposal which followed in 2007. That particular sentence has been changed in order to eliminate confusion. Second, in the essay, "Illegal Immigration As a Social Problem, Part I," (I.D. No. 131), in paragraph 26, the next-to-the-last sentence has been worded more precisely: changing does not to cannot, and political to ethno-political.

June 14, 2007

Some essays were improved for careful use of the word trauma. In some instances, this word had been used in a loose journalistic sense. As appropriate, the word trauma now reflects a more precise clinical usage, or has been replaced with some other descriptive word or phrase, or the sentence has been removed entirely. Only the corrected essays are currently posted on the website.

The corrected essays appear with the following topic identification numbers on the internet: 004, 059, 084, 088, 089, 090, 095, 096.

In accordance, the title of the following essay was changed:

"Election Year 2004: Trauma of 2001"
See: "Election Year 2004: Reaction to 2001."

April 4, 2007

Some essays were improved for careful use of words and expressions (e.g., complex vs. complicated, etc.) In most instances, these corrections involved one word or one expression per essay and did not affect the meaning of the essays. Only the corrected versions are currently posted on the website.

The corrected essays appear with the following topic identification numbers on the internet: 003, 005, 007, 011, 012, 014, 021, 022, 024, 025, 032, 035, 049, 050, 053, 054, 057, 059, 060, 075, 078, 079, 080, 085, 086, 087, 095, 096, 100, 104, 106, 107, 110, 113, 114, 115, 117, 119, 121, 123, 124.

August 1, 2006

Some essays underwent minor typographical corrections. Improvements were made in grammar mechanics consistency. These corrections did not affect the meaning of the essays. Only the corrected versions are currently posted on the website.

The corrected essays appear with the following topic identification numbers on the internet: 004, 005, 009, 012, 016, 020, 024, 027, 040, 046, 047, 053, 054, 055, 056, 057, 058, 059, 060, 062, 065, 067, 074, 077, 078, 082, 087, 090, 097, 099.

The titles of the following essays were changed to more accurately reflect essay content:

"Language on My Mind"
See: "Patient, Client, Consumer."

"October Notes"
See: "Columbus Day to Halloween."

Twin Towers of Bologna"
See: "Twin Towers of Italy."

January 16, 2006

The majority of essays underwent minor typographical and grammatical corrections. These corrections did not affect the meaning of the essays. Only the corrected versions are currently posted on the website.

Printed Versions are now available for most essays. These can be accessed at each main essay, from the link just below the author's name. Bibliography Notes appear at the bottom of each Printed Version for your convenience. The Bibliography Notes page was re-systematized for consistent order and improved readability.

December 1, 2003

Some essays underwent typographical and grammatical corrections, and minor content changes. If you have referred to any of these essays in your own work, please check the revised versions to update any quoted material. Old versions are repudiated by the author and are no longer available.

The corrected essays appear with the following topic identification numbers on the internet: 001, 002, 003, 004, 005, 010, 011, 013, 014, 015, 016, 017, 018, 019, 120, 021, 022, 023, 024, 028, 034, 035, 036, 037, 038, 039, 040, 041, 042, 043, 045.

The titles of the following essays were changed to more accurately reflect essay content:

"Difference Between Social Work and Dentistry"
See: "Dentistry with Social Work Impressions."

"Social Work Zone"
See: "Her Social Worker Zone."

A listing of consulted sources was added where needed, and this can be accessed at Essay Bibliography Notes.


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